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Mutated

"Great storyline, can't wait to read the follow up book. "

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Different species

"Will redeem his well-worded I would recommend it to all my friends and 5 all the way around. I dislike the fact that you make me have to do these surveys halfway through the book every freaking time"

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Good

"I liked the plot of the story. I would definitely recommend it to my friends for sure. "

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This can't be the end?!?

"This was getting to be a really good read but where's the rest of the story?!? This can't be the end"

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Good so far

"The book is good so far and I hope to read more about what happens with natasha and the little boy "

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wondering

"even with errors I love this story I hope there is a second part to it because I want to know what happens next also about the two children and who they are seeking I hate wondering how it ends for the young girl and about the new government "

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interesting plot but needs work

"It is a good attempt.Story has potential.Author needs to refine the writing though.The old addage of show dont tell apllies.One or 2 spelling mistakes.I suggest putting it through a couple of online editors and then to repost it afterwards.Once again the story has potential.Good luck"

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