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I liked story

"I quite likestilling if Im gonna be honest. Its like an eskape in to what u really wnat. And if Im gonna be honest, i think Asher shoulve shown some more emotions when his carer endet. I understand how he was content with it, but what he did for several years just ended becuse of an Inkitt. He shoulve been more sad, unless he has thaught about quiting fotbal before hand."

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Love it

"I love how this novel is going and how when one makes a mistake they go and are determined to fix it. "

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LARRY

"I loved it "

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It broke my heart o(╥﹏╥)o

"It is a great story! Really a good one! They were both deeply in love with each other. And it totally broke my heart seeing them in pain and sadness, especially the one near the end. It was a roller coaster of emotions. Asher's a jerk. I hate him, but Timber loves him. Still happy that they got together until the end. Cheers to forever! "

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Ahhhhhh

"Omg, I'm fangirling so much..I love this book, the characters are perfect and OMG.....this is beautiful...Aahhhhhh...this book is flawless, and great job writing it because I really enjoyed it. "

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please read if you like boy love

"i have to say at first i thought the book was boring but when i started reading more lets just say i fell in love the main charecters are great and their love is even greater .how they frist met was really good as well as the ending over all i would say great book and a must read"

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Across The Field by Emma2000

"I think this story titled : Across the Field was absolutely amazing. This is a great book it has lessons like forgiveness, loyalty,trust, bravery, and love. I would definitely read this again. Although I would like to make one suggestion. My suggestion would be to add Ashers point of view about not being aloud to play soccer again while the author does write about Ashers point of view the author does not go into depth about how it would mentally affect him. Other than that the book is amazing especially for people that need to learn or understand empathy more. I encourage the author to write more books. You are definitely talented and I wish you the best."

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Across The Field

"So good thats all I have to say ive read 4 of your books so far this one is my 2cond favorite.As ive said before keep it up"

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Great

"Very cute and simple story line. As always when Terra Void writes a book it's good."

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Good

"The story was good but it seems this was a Harry/Louis/1D fanfic that was changed, but the names were forgotten in parts. I wasn't a fan of the lack of character growth on Asher's part regarding what he did, and coupled with Timber sweeping it under the rug, it felt like a toxic element to their relationship. "

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