Great engaging story

"Very enjoyable a chapter, full of mystery to come, raging in like a Tropical Storm. Stanislavski immediately comes to mind, upon reading Your story. To paraphrase: when the Artist/Actor/Writer/Director becomes the story-line; and delivers an engaging performance successfully integrating both Art and Story. The audience/readers become One with both the Writer/Actor who are integrating and engaging the medium of this Story. When such audience becomes one with the writer and story; as if it were their own life or adventure to tell. Thus all elements have become One, and the work is a success."