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Amazing story

"Definitely worth reading...love all the magical elements "

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Very nice very engaging loved it and eagerly waiting for the next part.

"I liked the story it’s very engaging and the writing style is very good though I did find a few Mistakes like the invite date first it says 29 then 30 in reminder and the part on the dance floor at Sturrocks name Raymond is mentioned as Richard. And many other places grammar needs checking. But overall it was good. Waiting for the second part hope it will be available on Inkitt and full. To be honest I don’t read much as I loose interest after a while, but to my surprise I completed this whole in just 2 days. Eagerly waiting for the next part. "

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Good job

"Well written and interesting plot. Keep writing. Waiting for the next part."

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Nice book.. Love the ending..

"Very much touched by the character anikaa... ❤ Waiting for the part 2..☺️"

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