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Fluttering Hearts

"Your creative description of being a responsible teacher, who takes pride in seeing the accomplishments of her students, renews my faith in our education system. And to listen to your genuine empathy for their souls before the world has tainted their pure hearts is music to my ears. To know that you have made a definitive mark on their lives, affecting how they will grow and see the world, makes you not only a very positive influence, but as you say, a lasting memory in their souls. You have described your own soul purpose in every word and I appreciate your dedication. Exceptional poetry."

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"I wanted to give five stars for all as the work expressed so much love and made me smile, yet I held back, Why? as I wish to encourage you to write more, never stop expressing so much love. Regards Jenny."

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