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Loved it

"I was so into this story that I read it nonstop. It’s a beautiful story, although I didn’t like the ending. But great job!"

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I like it

"I don’t like the whole her kissing jasper and mika kissing alex but the rest is good"

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Mika

"The story was really interesting and a good read! "

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So much potential

"There are many strong moments at the beginig that show estraordinary potential for some serious drama. The middle is an excelent romantic-erotica, well writted but I felt that it took another path from the begining. Not sayin it was a wrong decition. The end felt a little bit rushed, kept some quality but the speed writting in noticeable. It is a pretty good stroy over all, three diferent perspectives in one story. And so many interesting facts where put on it, maybe some extension and time were needed. With more time this could easly full two or three books. The punctuation fails constantly but it does not mess wirh the flow, quite odd if you think about it. Loved the book, and you have somethin special in the pen!!!"

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Good story line, needed more detail.

"Good story line but needed more detail and less jumpy. "

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A Thriller that shifts to Fantasy

"The book starts of as a woman using a demon to get over her loss of friends who were killed. The demon instigates her into vengeance. That sounds ominous. The investigation begins. Again that's promising. But after that the entire story line shifts and you can't help feeling deprived. It is a teeange- young adult story. I would have rated it higher if I found the storyline a bit more cohesive."

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