What is your opinion?
A amazing tale
"Great use of description and exotic and dangerous places. He made the character come alive and the story line will capture you and hold you. A outstanding tale."
The Woman In Red
"Hello, i am sorry that i took so long to read your story, i had given it a heart in the nanowrimo contest after i had read the first chapter and so far, I have thoroughly enjoyed your story. I can already see an incredible plot developing and I am going to continue reading it as i progress further into the story. The concept is one that fascinates me and nothing intrigues me more than romance. I also would like to thank you for your feedback, i know i haven't updated in a while but i have been very busy and hope to get back into writing Forbidden but i have a big project i am working on which i shall be posting on 18th of January. Thank you for all the advice and i will put the pointers and praise you have given me and shall put it all to good use as I still have a lot to learn but thank you. If there is any other advice you can give me, i am all ears because i would love to get advice from someone with so much intelligence and experience. Thank you, I love you story and I can't wait to read more."
Intriguing
"I read the first couple chapters, and I'd like to read more, because this is a very interesting story. I really like the prose and the way you painted Kat's personality. Everything felt very smooth and vibrant in the story without you dancing around more sensitive subjects. I only marked it down because I ran into frequent grammatical errors. It was a very good beginning. Really well done!"
