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Great story

"It’s a pretty good story and well written "

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Love it

"I love the plot line and I would definitely recommend this book, it has a great writing style and I can’t wait to read the rest!"

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Awesome!

"I absolutely love this take on Twilight!!! There are a few little errors but mostly it's just an amazing story that I can't wait to read more of. "

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Yes.

"It was cute a little cliche but it made me really emotional like you could almost feel the pain the characters are feeling"

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Revitalized

"Great story really enjoy it I would say it's 1 of the best fan fiction stories I've read glad that it's not going along strictly by the books and movies "

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Love it

"First I want to say that I love the way it's written. I love the way you choose a character that wasn't one of the main characters of the show like so many others do. The only thing I don't like is the fact it mentions pictures in it and I don't see them. I chose the rating due to the fact that I love the book and would refer it to anyone else I know."

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Amazing!

"I love Bella bashing books so much! And this one is so well written. More to come."

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time heals all

"please continue this story i fell in love with it "

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Loved it!!

"I absolutely love this, one of the best fan fictions I've read!"

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Twilight

"I want to read more please"

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AMAZING...really.

"This is honestly really good, I hope you write more! I love this book and you even made me cry at the start, hehe. "

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Great

"Love this book, very interesting take on everything x"

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Time Heals All

"Was so sad I finish what there was😭. Can't wait for more!!"

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I don’t know

"So I put 4 stars because I love the story But I only put 3 stars because the plot was not that big but the story is definitely very good I give 5 stars for the writing stile because ist very pleasurable to read I give 4 stars to gramma because I have no idea if it’s ride because English is not my mother tongue"

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Time Heals All

"I would recommend this book to the Twilight fans because it puts a really nice twist on the storyline."

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