What is your opinion?
Interesting Read
"You can tell the author worked hard and though hard on the novel. She has some technical skills to work on but it is her first completed work so I expected as much when I originally started this book a few months ago. Her writing style interesting and you can see the progress of it through the book. The plot of the story I enjoyed. It had its ups and downs but when getting to the end a lot of things came together but there are things still unsolved and I can't wait for the possible sequel to see how far she will progress. The character's grew as the story progressed but through out the book I can't help but say I totally ship Roxie and Roy. And that foreshadow at the start of the book! Oh my god it was surprising. The plot is a 4... 4.5 in my books especially for a new writer on the scene of novels it was very well done and planned. I defiantly would suggest to other's to read the book. And also tell Arcin to look over her work and fix up some spelling mistakes and word mix ups that slipped through the first time. So for in consideration to all this and the fact of her being a inexperienced write I rate the novel a 4. "
Good read, but needs some work
"I loved the plot of the story and it kept me entertained, and that is what a book’s purpose is, but it was a little hard to follow. As a first time writer, I’m sure I’m not much better. I saw your progress throughout the book and that was good, you just need to work on grammar, punctuation and other technical stuff"
