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A Good Start

"Nothing like a hanging to gather a community on a cold day in March. I enjoyed the slightly sarcastic tone in the prologue which then took a more serious tone. Whether or not it was intentional, it was appreciated. The woman in question seems interesting and I like the possibly supernatural turn this story may take later on. I feel that the story of Ching Shih might be intertwined in here? Just a thought though. I do like that she has darker skin, which sets her apart from the majority of protagonists but I'm not sure if it's merely a tan or if she actually is a PoC. The prologue is a good start to a promising story."

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