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My Shining Star

Summary

Manan Emotional roller coaster. How will Manik react when Nandini entered his life like a villan when he was proposing Mukti?

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
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Age Rating
13+

My Shining Star


Manik is looking at the sky watching stars.

He is smiling looking at a cute star.

A 4 year old girl come and pulled Manik's dress.

Manik: Gf what u want?

Girl: Bf Moma is trying to make cake but it turns disaster.

Manik: Ha as expected ur mom won't change. Hm how many times will i teach her to make a cake?

Girl: Yes Bf what to do as Tara's dad is a super cook so my mom become lazy.

She made a cute pout.

Manik kisses her on cheeks.

Tara: Bf are u missing ur shining star?

(Pointing a star in the sky)

Manik: Yes always

Manik: This is ur story my shining star. Its my story (in silance)Tara did u want to hear the story of Shining star?

Tara: Yes Bf plz tell her story na.

Manik: Ok Gf

(They sat on lawn and he started narrating the story)

...............

4 years before

Malhotra Mansion

Alya: Manik are u ready for the marraige?.

Manik: Yes Aloo, u know na dad loves her alot.

Druv: Hm okay am asking about u. Did u love her?

Manik: Mm love its a broken thread man. So coming to my present like ha i like her.

Alya: Manik she is too good infact Cabir Bhayaa's kids likes her alot.

Manik: Ya bhaiya is enjoying his like in US leaving kids here.

Druv: Manik i think u should talk to her.

Manik: yes

Manik holding a girl's hand.

Manik: Mukti am sorry for avoiding u always..

Mukti signed: Its fine Manik. I know u from childhood na u never considers me as a partner and all this happen suddenly.

Manik: Mukti my lady thank you for understanding. U are my savear from hitler. Yaar u know everything about me so plz give me some time to accept this relationship.

Mukti (sign's): Manik are u sure abt our marraige? I mean i don't want to be a burden on u.

Manik hugged her

Manik: chal paghal am your voice from childhood right? So i will be it till we die. (He kissed her)

Someone tapped Manik disturbing his time with Muki.

Girl: Hello my love. How could u cheat me and hug another girl ???

(She pulled Manik away from Mukti and punched him hard on his stomach)

Manik: U????

Girl: Yes me only ur one and only one wife.

Manik (his jaw's are open): Wat??? No no Mukti don't listen to her.

Girl pulled Mukti

Girl: Am his Wife Nandini Malhotra and (pointing a 3 year kid) she is our daughter Tara Malhotra.

Manik: Omg my kid? Nandini chudail how is it possible? U left me 3 years before without saying anything.

Nandini: Manik i left u as my sister was not well. Then i got to know i am pregnant but when i returned u already left the college.

Manik: This kid is not mine.

Mr Malhotra: Manik what am i hearing!? Who is this girl?

Manik: Dad she is no one

Nandini: No uncle am ur daughter in law and this is manik's daughter.

Mukti left crying.

Manik tried to stop her but Nandini come in between.

Nandini: Am sorry Mukti. Manik is mine so u can leave.

Manik: Nandini stay away from my life. Mukti plz let me explain she is nothing to me and that kid is not mine.

Nandini: Mukti u can leave (pointing Mukti the door)

Manik: How dare u? Don't u have a heart? How can u be so rude to her? She is a pure soul

Nandini: I don't care. U have to accept me.

Mr Malhotra: Manik if this girl is lieing u have 2 days time to prove ur innocence till then let her stay here. Nandini i don't want Mukti's parents to know about this so u have to stay her as a tution teacher.

Nandini: Ok daddy

Mr Malhotra: No uncle

Nandini: ok uncle.

...........

Two days passed Nandini won the heart of Cabir Malhotra's twin's. She made them good boys and their bonding with Hitler now changed too.

Mr Malhotra pov: Hm in past 6 months my grandchildren's never talked to me thinking am the reason for Cabir to leave them here and head to Us. But Nandini changed them alot. I wish to see Manik leading a happy life but Mukti? No i can't break my promise to her. Nandini u have to leave my house.

His pov broke when one guy entered the house claiming to be Nandini's husband.

He tried his best to claim as her husband but there drama broke when Nandini spell the beans telling Malhotra that he is Manan's classmate Aryaman.

Aryaman who used to be Manik's shadow in college and her Rakhi bro. She proved her point by showing there college pics.

Mr Malhotra fumed at Manik and slapped him.

...........

1 week passed Manik is failing all time as Nandini is doing her all moves carefully.

Cabir and Navya reached back Malhotra mansion to solve Manan problems and took there kids back with them.

That night,

Nandini is sleeping peacefully in her room and Tara is with kids.

Manik enters the room and tried to kiss her

Nandini pushed him.

Manik: What happen my love? Aren't we husband- wife? Hey Tara is my daughter right? Don't u want more kids???

He tried to be physical with her.

Nandu slapped him on face

Nandini: Don't u dare to do sex with me.

Manik in tears: In last 3 years everyday i used to cry thinking why u left me? Now am not regreting to be with Mukti. Nandini i hate u. Tara is not my baby i know u knows it well. I hate u for playing with my feelings, my life. U are dead for me.

He left in anger.

.........

Nandu tried to follow him but Cabir stopped her.

Cabir': Nandini i don't think Manik loves u. Plz understand the situation he likes Mukti.

Nandini: ofcourse ur brother is suffering due to u. Did u remember Soha?

Cabir: Soha!!! My soha...

Nandini: Yes Tara is ur daughter. I came here to give her a better future. I know Manik loves me but i broke his trust all because of u Cabir. U are the reason for all our loss. My sister commited suicide bcoz of u.

She left crying.

..........

Manik is sitting on roof top thinking about Nandini.

Manik: Nandini my Shining star ....

6 years before: Law college

Manik was sitting on bike with Aryaman commenting on girls.

Manik: Yaar that girl is looking hot.

Arya: No bro ur choice is too bad ok if u have guts then go and kiss that girl (pointing Nandu)

Manik: Wow she is dam cute. God i want to eat her cheeks. Ok ok i am accepting ur challenge.

He ran towards Nandu and tapped her shoulders from back.

When she turned he kissed her on right cheek.

Nandu fumed on him and left the place.

Next day Manik was forced to apologise to her infront of whole college.

First 3 months Manan were busy in there jom and jerry fights but slowly it turned to love. She started spending time with him in basket ball court where Manik used to play daily.

Manik is a born singer and guitarist.

She used to compose songs for him.

They become the famous love birds of their law college.

After 2 year of their relationship Manik was bathing happily in his room and Nandu was singing a new song for him tunning his guitar.

He was also humming along with her after some times she stopped singing.

When Manik came out from washroom Nandu had already left from his room leaving a letter near his guitar saying "Goodbye forever".

From that day since 3 years he didn't meet her. She had blocked all ways to contact her.

Present:

A lonely fear appeared from Manik's eyes looking at there photo. He used to think about her always but now he hates her.

Manik: I hate u Nandini. Why are u playing with my feelings?

Cabir: Manik, Nandini is here for me Tara is not ur daughter. She was a mistake from my side. Am sorry Manik because of me she lost her sister, u lost ur name.

Manik: Bhaiya what are u saying???

Cabir explained him everything regarding his relation with Soha.

Manik: Mm so Nandini left me for Soha di. Shit i blamed her in this 3 years without knowing the truth.

Cabir: Manik i will make everything right. Its time to tell Navya everything we will take care of Tara.

Manik: Bhaiya plz don't ruin ur happy life i will take care of Tara she is my daughter.

Cabir: What are u saying? What about Mukti?

Manik: hm i will talk to her she deserves someone better than me.

................

Manik: Nandini am so sorry

Nandini: No Manik am sorry for ruining ur happiness. Because of me uncle slapped u, Mukti's parents become angry. Am so sorry.

Manik: Leave it Mukti is fine. So can we plan about our future?

Nandu: Manik am leaving tomaorrow so u can plan for ur wedding date soon. Then one more thing i had informed Mukti's parents and ur dad about our relation. So all the things are clear now.

Manik: Nandini u can't just leave like this. I want u to be my

(Before he completes Nandini started singing a song and danced with the kids)

Manik pulled her closer

Manik: Can u be my wife Nandini????

A lonely tears appeared from her eyes.

Nandu: No Manik my chapter is over from ur life. Sorry

She fainted.

............

Nandu is admitted in hospital.

Doctors were running here and there trying to find her problem she was vomiting blood and become fatigue.

Manik had arranged the best doctor's for her but he burst out something which made Manik loss all his happiness.

Doctor: Manik am so sorry, Nandini is having brain tumor and now she is in the final stage. I cannot promise anything but will try my best to save her.

Nandu is lying on bed hearing the song which she had sang 3 years before for Manik.

Manik, Mukti carrying Tara, Cabir- Navya along with their kids, Mr Malhotra came to see her and give there good bye kiss.

Nandu gave Manik's hand to Mukti.

Nandu: Mukti plz forgive me for treating u bad. Manik i want u to marry Mukti and be Tara's dad. Mukti can u be my Tara's mom?

Mukti sign's: Nandu u will be fine soon so u can stay with Manik fore ever.

Nandu: Manik i will be with u always but Mukti plz promise me that u will take care of my love and Tara.

Mukti nods yes.

She kissed Tara and gave her to Mukti.

They left leaving Manan alone.

Nandu: Manik did u hate me now?

Manik: No my shining star

Nandu: wow u still remember that name?

Manik: yes i used to call u shining star while we were in relationship hm but now also u are my star.

He kissed her on forehead.

Nandu: Manik i love u.

Manik: i too love u.

Nandu: i always thought to be ur wife and stay happy but 3 years before when i got call from dad telling about my sister's suicide i got broken. Manik in last 3 years i tried my best to keep my Tara safe but when i got to know about my tumour i started searching for her dad. Then i got to know about Cabir being ur elder brother so i entered this house doing all those stupid drama. Plz forgive me.

Manik: Nandu leave all those things.

He placed her on his lap and kissed her all over her face.

They spend some quality time in each other's embrace. Mukti was watching this from outside but she left them alone.

Nandu slept after vomiting blood again.

Doctor: Manik, Nandini's condition is dam critical. I had ordered one medicine for her from AIMS Delhi can u go and collect it from airport?

Manik: sure. Doc plz take care of her.

Manik went back fastly after 3 hour contienous drive. He had an accident in between but still he drove the bike with his wounded leg.

Manik walk towards ICU limbing his leg.

He saw doctor and nurses running here and their in tension.

Manik went near her.

His Shining star was smiling looking at her.

Nandu: I will always love u Manik. I will be watching u from the sky.

She took her last breath.

.................

Present

Manik: Mukti, let me help u

Mukti (sign's): Am sorry for ruining Nandu's fav cake.

Manik: Hey no i will make it.

They made the cake together.

Tara climbed on Mukti's back as she want to see there baking skills.

Trio went out with the cake to cut it for Nandu.

They sat in the lawn.

Manik cut the cake and forwarded one peace to a star.

Manik: Happy birthday my love my shining star. I miss you so much.

Tara: Happy birthday moma star. (She took the cake from Manik's hand and ate it)

Mukti tickled Tara

Mukti signed: Baby it was ur star moma's cake.

Tara: Moma my star moma loves me alot na so she will adjust.

All laughed seeing her innocence.

Manik pulled Mukti closer and they lyed down on lawn.

He kissed her.

She layed her head on Manik's tummy and Tara slept over Mukti.

Manik: Thanku Mukti for being my support system. Thanku shining star for making me a good husband.

The end.

How is the Os?????

Will Nandu always shines for Manik?


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it's very emotional 😥😭😭 but a good story....his shining star😫😪

6 years
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r u a malayaleee

6 years