It's perfect
"I like the plot very much 🥹"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न


"I like the plot very much 🥹"
"Good story, but abandoned."
"There were a few spelling mistakes or missed words here and there but other then that I loved it"
"This is a heart wrench story that seemed to have a plot building to it before you stopped writing. There are a few grammar errors but the over all story has a good structure. Please finish this story I'd love to see how it plays out. "
"I love this. Please write more. "
"Enjoy. Reading it. Could be more fluent. Dont know ehat pov means.I enjoy reading and will continue wigh it."
"It is a great book you did amazing "
"Feel good storyline. Repetitive although I know it’s different pov My first story. I’ll keep going. I wish the author well. "
"This story is so good. I mean like .... The story of how the twist takes place how will starts to care, how she forgives every one..and her mother comes in.. late but still cares and loves. I love how well everything's blending in.. I would recommend this to everyone of my friends. "
"Good story. I know about that kind of father"
"lovely storyline, but proofread next time before posting, i love the twist of fate and you did an amazing job with the emotions that comes along with the chapters, i actually got teary... nice story sydnee "
"liked the whole story and what i disliked is that its soo dramatic always saying sorry and baby which isn't my thing but so far i liked it very muchh my friend i. chose that rating because it was good,theplot was good too buf there are some grammatical errors "
"This book was so good! But one thing that I have to say is just the grammar it’s not the best but that doesn’t really bother me so overall I will recommend to some people definitely!!! "
"I highly recommend this book to anyone who’s been through any form of abuse, rather it be physically or emotionally. And anyone who’s suffered with self harm. It’s incredible. Once you start reading, you won’t be able to stop! "
"Hi there Author 👋☺️ At first I salute you this book is damn good and u know what I don't even have words to describe this........ I Recommended this book to everyone in my friend circle i hope they would also love this!"
"I read this because I like reading "
"I think the plot is very well executed and the characters are really believable. It’s an interesting and easy read for all ages from young adults and older audiences."
"This story is so extremely intense The characters are so awe, Inspiring. These situations unfortunately are more common than most folks would likely admit "
"i did not like how her dad was hurting her i did like how once he found out he changed for the better i relate to her that’s why i find this book so interesting."
"This is my first ever novel I am reading and to be honest, it's perfect. The novel made me tear up so badly that I am still crying. Thank you so much, Author for this great novel."