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Beautifully written

"I can not wait for the next chapter. So much emotion from just the intro. And what a beautiful final line to end the story on, I could picture the smirk in the words. Truly a wonderful read so far"

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"This story is absolutely amazing! A story about a marriage, considered an alliance more than anything, that both man and woman feel uncomfortable being married to each other. There aren't many chapters in this story yet, but I look forward to reading more."

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