What is your opinion?
Im hooked
"This was an amazing read! The attention to detail was perfect. I felt as if I was in the story. I could feel the intensity of thrill inside as my heart beat faster and faster. The chill of the fan on my skin even though there isn't one with me. Being someone who loves the mysterious thriller/horror stories I will definitely be keeping an eye open for more to come!"
I'm hooked!
"From the beginning of the story I didnt want to stop reading. I was hooked. With every line there was something that drew me more into it to keep going wondering what was going to happen. Immediately I could felt like I was actually there witnessing what you were describing and I could feel my heart beating faster. Being someone who loves the thrill of scary stories I tried to read as fast as I could to know what was next. This is an amazing story and very well written! I would absolutely read this book! I hope there is more to come! Please??"
Heart pounding
"As I am reading this story, my mind kept trying to read to fast to see what was going to happen next. I could feel my own heart pounding faster and faster with each line I read. Thank you to the author for writing this,"
Andrew H.
"A very good read on how the sub-conscious can really twist reality around! As I was reading, the writing drew me in closer and closer... almost making me ponder, "Has this happened to me before? I feel like it has!" Any story that you can relate to is a good one! Lapseofmind is onto something here! Looking forward to the next installment!!!!! Andrew H."
I'd suggest reading at midnight with the lights off
"This was a very fun read, and I highly suggest it to anyone who likes a good tale of the bizarre to think about at night. I've always been intrigued by horror, and this one certainly has all the elements that make a great horror story. The introduction using the mundane, normal object (the fan) was a great contrast to the supernatural feel that followed later. I also really like how the character kept referring back to the fan. (If anything, I'd do that even more. Make it something as a tie to the character's sanity. Perhaps pull it in again at the end to really tie the story together.) The monster in this story is a little lacking, in my opinion. I would write a little more on what it looks like, how it moves. Does it make any strange noises or say anything? Th unknown can be very scary, but the vague can also pull people out of the plot, thus ruining the suspense. This is what really makes writing horror a challenge. Descriptions are what can pull a person right into the world, and make the whole thing personal to them, which is all the more scary. All that said, I really enjoyed this piece. It was a quick read that got my heart pumping and my nerves up late at night. Just what a good horror story should be. Well done, you certainly have my vote!"
