Inkitt
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Sweet and heartbreaking when you realize shes forgetting his name and things

"I like how I had to keep reading to understand what's wrong with her. And as i continued reading i could feel how sad she was. How upset she got When she forgot her son's name. It was very good especially for your first story"

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Heart touching

"Hey, it is your first story but really heart touching. I have really enjoyed it.. Keep up your writings and take Love."

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