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A Very Interesting Story

"I loved the concept and morals of this story. Living your life because you don't know when time will catch up with you, sometimes despite rules is a real truth. Many people say they want to make a difference, but wait before they actually do. I loved the time clock that Arthur had and the way the author used "Baby New Years" for different time zones to convey lives. For the short time that Arthur is in the story, he has a lot of development going to his character. I thought the short story moved at a great pace, covering the important events. I especially loved the ending, but I won't spoil it for readers. :) Applause to the author! **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS. :)"

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