Good overall

"Good overall opening. The switch in the POV character from one chapter to the next gives the story a nice zippy pace while also clearly showing the reader the differences in the sisters. The story would need a little proofreading as there are a few typos here and there. -- Grammarly is a great free tool, that helps catch little grammatic mistakes and can also be used as a thesaurus which can help give an author's writing a bit more depth."