Has potential

"There are some typos and grammar issues, but for the most part I could tell what you were trying to say, and some editing could easily correct that. I love your writing style and the setting of this story. Your imagery really brought the scenes to life. and I'm intrigued by the love story and how the characters will develop. So far, it's a good start considering there are only two chapters. I'm interested to see what happens next! "