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Wonderful

"This was a perfect interlude, so well captured and I love that it doesn't diverge from canon. You write both characters so convincingly, and I can practically hear Bedelia's voice in your words. Lovely stuff. Keep them coming..."

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Superb

"What a truly wonderful interlude and it would just nicely in canon. Through their exchange, you captured Will and Hannibal's personalities perfectly. Truly made me wish it had happened, so I'm glad it as least happened in your mind. :)"

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cool story

"This was a perfect interlude, so well captured and I love that it doesn't diverge from canon. You write both characters so convincingly, and I can practically hear Bedelia's voice in your words. Lovely stuff. Keep them coming..."

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