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I admire your creativity

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at pluxedo AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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I Enjoyed It!

"It was a fun read. I do not really like scifi but I loved reading The Never Ending Tails. I believe there should be a sequel to this story of even it should be transformed into a movie. It would be great on the big screen."

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Blew My Mind

"I read this over the course of a year (about 2 years ago). I read it aloud to two of my friends in our book club. We allowed pauses at any moment for discussion, and there was a LOT of discussion. I was amazed by Nabil's imagination and his ability to weave many ancient mythologies/themes into his own epic tapestry of a universal origin story. The story sparked curiosity and excitement inside of me and fueled interesting conversations with my friends. My favorite section is the definitely the tale of the universal forces cooperating, fighting, and dancing with each other. It's definitely a rough diamond. It could use some editing here and there. Some grammar corrections, and maybe some sentence/paragraph restructuring. But overall, it's a story with big ideas and one that clearly comes from a bright beacon of a mind."

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Fiction?

"i thought this ws supposed to be a story of fiction, not fact....There are some grammatical errors and Lucifer gets far too much positive attention... ;-("

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