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A Father's love

"Please update this story as soon as possible. You are an amazing author and even though this is hard to read , I really want to finish please "

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"Excellent book reality "

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the fathers love

"the story is intriguing....waiting for the mystery to unfold soon..."

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A Father's Love

"Good story line, however, something seems to be off. Doesn't hold readers interest. Read (2) two chapters last night, and throughout the day, I had forgotten the story. Kept thinking, I had just finished a novel, I must search for another ( not realizing I had even read this, and, l had (1) one more chapter to go ). Very stale. Does have potential."

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