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its so good !

"the characters, interactions, background, chemistry, everything is so well written !!! ^^ i luv it ♡♡♡♡"

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Daddy Issues

"I love this book so much, your writing style is brilliant. Sue's character development is🤌🏼. I rated 5 stars coz that's what this book deserves"

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Love it!!

"I enjoyed this book so much! I can feel he has a dominant side and I want to see it I caravel it. I want to see his daddy dom side. "

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Great story

"I love the strong heroine… her childhood trauma spoke to mine…. We seem to have debt with in the same way … dug a hole and bury it deep…. I love that someone came along to help free form the demons that trapped her"

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Daddy issues

"This book is amazing, more people need to read this!"

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The story is as sweet as honey.

"Author has great emotional intelligence and a good understanding of how different personalities work. This can be seen in the story. Regardless, more humour should be brought to story since you have stated it as a rom-com. Flashback technique was used appropriately. It would be better to bring more plot twists (maybe a betrayal) to make the story worth publishing. I can see myself picking up the novel , reading it passionately with vigour but as time passes I might leave it halfway and may not finish the novel unless something unexpected happens. Your plot is very predictable but then again your story is not complete so you never know. "

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