Inkitt
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To short

"😭😭😭😭 next book please "

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Very good short story!!

"Love the short story! I wish your mind had come up with a longer one! I enjoyed the story. Thank you!"

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Time flies when your having fun

"So far so good "

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Good Story

"It's a good start to a story. Needs to spell check the last chapter some more."

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El Din

"Good start for an unknown writer. Story is thin. Needs more development. Short enough to maintain interest . "

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