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Stolen Innocence

"I enjoyed the story and the characters, but I don't like the ending. It's so sad "

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Stolen Innocence

"What a story, sure got hooked. Even if there were mistakes made. I still enjoy reading book. That 2 of your books I have read. So I am going for my 3rd. Hope the next does not end so sad."

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Nice story

"Enjoying it..."

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Nice

"Nice story!"

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Beautiful story

"Really good job, an unexpected ending but wow i love it😍👍 "

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Keep writing!

"Loving the story so far. I'd love to see where this goes when they have all 3 girls in the house! Jesse is seriously crazy and the fact that his 2 friends are just as dumb is what makes this story unique. Please keep writing 😁"

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Sad

"This story is sad as it just shows this lady as a week back boneless person. It evokes feelings of disgust and disappointment in the leading ladys character.... she is weak and has no will to be more then a slave. I wish you could have made her stronger more determined and have her fall in love with the male (jesse) in a different light. Now it just seems like she has broken and a shadow of herself verses the drive and fight she had in high school. She also seems to sugger from Stockholm syndrome which is just sad and depressing "

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Stolen innocence

"More update"

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