Inkitt
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I'll hold you

"Great plot for a story. Well done 👏 THANK YOU. "

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I'll hold you

"It's a great story"

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I'll hold you

"I liked the plot twists. Better grammar and it's for anyone aged around 14+ "

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Book

"Good book xx"

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Aidens Longed Love

"Wow an Awesome story indeed, can't wait to read more.... Breathtaking "

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I'll hold you!

"Absolutely beautiful story"

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I’ll hold you!

"SPaG was terrible. I could not understand most of the things they were saying to each other or when it was just a character thinking alone (a soliloquy). Overall (minus the SPaG) it was a brilliant story! Twists and turns, plotting and other throwing. It was all very entertaining for the reader. Another thing about the book, the trigger warnings do not really need to be there as there is not much gore and not many explicit words to describe the self harm she had been experiencing in the book. I understand the person who was writing this book was under pressure of exams and that they may not talk, speak or write much English but the plot… the plot they had made was extraordinary! I am very sad and angry with this book as long with all the others because it had to come to an end… :( As death do part us, I hope to meet the author in heaven! Have a lovely day, Ma’am / Sir~"

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It's amazing ...I liked it much❤️

"It's an amazing story ...I like reading it intentionally and liked the perfect happy ending of the story."

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