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Amazing
"Steamy!!!! Would love to read more!!! Definitely need a part 2 now, then at least 20 parts more!!"
I loved it!!
"I absolutely loved this story. You should definitely write more. It's amazing and I can't wait foe more. "
Best
"Grammar isn't the best but you can get the gist of it. "
Needs work man
"Alright, so you really need to reread your work. It's obvious you didn't really edit and wrote this on the fly, and if you did edit, you need to find a proof-reader. All in all, grammar so bad it turned me off. Thanks"
Your tea SIR
"Tale has simple circumstances that anyone can put a personal minds eye picture to,the characters are relaxed and secure in their roles they give reader enough to be drawn into their journey"
Very basic stuff but fun
"It was ok... very basic BDSM not enough build up. But an ok read. "
