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What is your opinion?
Overall not bad
"Grammar needs some work, particularly some missing spaces after punctuation, but honestly that's the only issue. I'm not normally one for poetry but this is very well done so far. I suppose the main reason I like it is that it's bleak and a little nihilistic, something I find very relateable."
Poetry Review
"I am not normally a poet, but writing things in lines and hitting enter is hardly poetry. There is little rhyming, it doesn't follow any sort of poetic structure and the constant talk of "star-gods" makes no sense, even if you take some time to think about it. Overall, quite bad."
