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Delighted

"One of the better fan-fiction stories I've ever read. Unlike some readers, I like the descriptions a book might have - especially as vivid as they are in this story - the better and more detailed they are, the more they immerse you deep into the plot and before you know it - you get yourself hooked up :) I can only say this: I want to read more of it!"

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Impressed

"The strongest point of this story are vivid descriptions. It makes you feel like you are watching or even participating in the story. It has a solid and plausible plot. Writer has developed his own style and I do appreciate his tendency to explain things. It makes plot easier to follow, 5/5 on all accounts."

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