thoughts for my boybest

CosmicChaos: This story's plot was an excellent concept and I think that with some editing and fleshing out, it could be great. There are quite a few spelling/grammatical errors and, in parts, it feels a little rushed. All that aside, i still enjoyed it enough to not stop halfway through. It's a shorter story, ...

Aditi: A good story. Never felt bored. It was nice that the story also showed other things than just their love story like career family etc. but i expected jess and moose together in the end but it never happened. But overall nice.

NG: Really funny and beautiful work. Will tempt you to visit Scotland and try out some never heard before food. Well done author!

CrimsonMabel: I really enjoyed your story! Sydney’s personality, the Vegas setting, and the chemistry between the characters feel very cinematic. I think this would look amazing as a comic/webtoon with proper character designs and illustrations. I actually got some ideas on how your story could be visually adapte...

User12345: 10/10. Great read! Dana always writes amazing characters and in this book I think the dog is my favourite 🐝

Harriett Williams: Interesting plot, and amazing how many bad guys are always dishing out the punishment to the heroine. I am waiting for the happy ending I thought was coming, but it seems to be getting further away.

Fridah Joseph : It is too interesting I'm afraid I will give up spoilers, every chapter left me wanting more and the ending was well thought out.The main characters just 😍😍🥰🥰And all the other characters played a big role in making this book too good ..... The banter amazing,the humor😂😂😂, the romance 🥵🔥🔥Ju...

Maria Elena: Writen with humor and a nice story to move the characters along. If the author ever turned it into a longer story, there is material for a novel. Regardless, a well written, interesting story.

virgie: Like the pace of this novel. Love that both parties see the cheaters try to recover from their betrayal. Both parties are too wise to succumb to their ploy.