We are only human

"I like where this story is going, it's different than others. The sentences are spot on and easy to understand. (Just a little reminder, I saw a little grammatical error at the start, just a misplaced comma!) I got a clear image whilst reading this. My heart is breaking for Lorna. I have to admit though, Samuel Clay is smart. Pity he's a psychopath :''). I love this one! Keep writing!"