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The Unwanted Guest

"I love this book so much I want to keep reading it till the end. I love prinxiety and logicality and I am pretty sure this is the only book with both. Keep writing, you're good at it!"

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Im in Awe

"So amazing! I am on the edge of my seat for the next book! Cant wait to read it ^ ^"

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Great! Is there a second book?

"It seems odd the cliffhanger it was left on, and for the life of me I can’t navigate this app, which I downloaded specifically to find a second part to this. I also can’t tell if this is super old and abandoned because, again, I can’t navigate. If this isn’t abandoned can you let me know or tell me where to find the second part when it’s made? Thanks!"

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One of the best I have read on this platform

"I loved the cliffhanger at the end. And the whole concept of this modern fanasy plot is very intriguing! I would like if we got to learn more about deciet and explore him being a demon a bit more."

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Amazing. Just one thing...

"What happened to Virgil? We get that Deceit impersonated Patton, but what happened to Virgil? does everything come alright in the end? Do people die? What about Remus and Deceit? How does Deceit react to the news about Virgil? I guess, he forced it upon Virgil though... Will you continue the story though? If so, I'm down for it to happen! I'd really like to know what would happen. ~Virgil_The_Emo"

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Wow!

"This story is great! I love the character arch. I enjoy that unlike most Sanders Sides fanfiction, this one isn't just smut! It has a real story, and I love the cliffhanger at the end. Can't wait for the next book!"

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