What is your opinion?
Nervous Glitter Tornado
"I think that Alec will confess that he has had a crush on Magnus for all this time and he'll be terrified that Magnus's silence is him judging Alec and Alec will start crying but try to hide it and apologize, but he doesn't explain and Magnus is just like 'for what' and Alec explains that he had been such a burden when he could have just hired a professional and even though it was Magnus that was supposed to pay for the date, Alec pays him back and leaves before Magnus can stop him. Then, Magnus goes looking for him, but somehow Alec ended up, like, a mile away and he's confused about why he tried to follow and Magnus is just like 'Well, what kind of a date would I be if my let my date walk home, alone?' Either that, or Izzy confronts him about Alec's problems because she's tired of watching him getting torn apart over Magnus treating him like another one of his models, and Magnus just tells her that he has had a crush on Alec for the longest time, and that he was waiting/holding back for some reason. You can combine or change this if you want. Also, my favorite chapter was definitely the one were they fell asleep on the couch at Magnus's house. That was (bold letters and italics) JUST TOO CUTE. You need to make a drawing of that. or have someone else do it."
Taking thing slow!
"Absolutely amazing! Great plot! I love it when Alec was willing to take thing steps by steps with Magnus! You really nailed it at the "taking thing slow"! Despite some grammatical mistakes! But I guess nothing is perfect, isn't it? In general, this story is beautiful!!! Good job!"
