What is your opinion?
Greatalisious story
"Fantastic story. One of the best I've seen on inkitt. Fantastic story. Fast paced and the action starts right away. It is completely original as far as I am concerned. A great read! To anyone out there, definitely read it."
Enthralling!
"Turning the simple idea of birds, and incorporating their characteristics into new species was something altogether entirely unique! You did an amazing job, in my opinion, of not info-dumping. Some authors, when creating an entirely new universe, will just flat out state how everything works. I loved how you dropped hints and used flashbacks to describe events. There was a gradual suspense build up tugging the story along of the Eagle's return. I believe this story has great potential, along with Rebel's plan. Minor concerns: -the story was perhaps a bit too faced paced (too many new characters with too little developments to show their personality.) Once in a while, I'd re-read the chapter or certain section to get a better grasp or remind myself who the character was again. -there were very few grammar hiccups, nothing that a minor edit wouldn't solve. Overall, you have a very, very promising story on your hands, and I'm glad that I found looking under the sci-fi section."
Just an avid reader.
"When reading a story, I think only one character should be using "I"..not every character. It gets confusing sometimes. There are some other grammar errors. The author should proofread better. Maybe they would catch some of the errors. Even with these things, I am still enjoying the story. Reading is one of my favorite things. Btw..I'm a 70-year-old woman."
