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LOVED IT!

"This story goes off in the best way, Dr. Girha hopping onto the Tiberius and immediately getting hit with a chaotic crew and a snarky AI is already a vibe."

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Chapter one review

"Overall, I like it. The main character is given enough detail to make her interesting. The exposition, given in the form of a reviewed documentary is not too long and gives us an idea of what the characters might face. One quibble is the formatting style. The sentences are broken up making for a little difficulty in reading. It is good to see writers daring to venture forth with their own original characters within the Star Trek universe and not relying solely on well-known and established characters. I look forward to seeing where the author will take this."

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