Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

The Night Thief that Stole My Heart

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

What happens when Lance saves a girl in trouble and has an unexpected guest. read to see

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

The Beginning



Lance was walking home from Hunk's house when he heard a noise coming from in front of him. “Please! Don’t kill me!” A girl said looking behind her as she ran. She ran right into Lance and started pleading, “Help me, please! Someone chasing me, trying to kill me!”

“Ok-ok, “ Lance says while looking behind the girl. He didn't see anyone there, but he decided to trust her. ”Come with me, you will be safe.” Lance took her hand and walked her to the hospital, which luckily was only a few minutes away. What Lance doesn’t see was a person staring at them from the shadows.

With the girl in the hospital, Lance started his walk home. Lance has been living by himself since his friend Shiro went missing a few months ago. What he doesn’t know that a person was waiting for him. Just as lance is about to open his front door he gets a call. It is Hunk.

Lance answers, “Hello?, What’s Up?”

Hunk” What the heck dude are you ok?!?”

Lance confused "why wouldn’t I be, you just saw me a few hours ago”

“Yeah but Shay just saw you at the hospital.”

“Oh, yea I was there”

“So, are you going to tell me why….?”

Lance proceed to tell hunk about the weird incident that happened that night.

“.... “

“Hunk??”

“I’m here, that’s very weird. Did she say anything to you when she ran into you?”

“Yea, She kept rambling about someone chasing her “

“Did she say who?”

“.......”

“Lance?”

“ Sorry, I was just thinking that this sounds so familiar to me……...:”

“How?”

“......Give me a second…..I’m looking for the report…..”

As Lance was looking frantically around the room, his unexpected gest started to move in for a kill.

Hunk huffed, ” What report?”

“Shiro’s “

At the mention of Shiro’s name, the intruder stopped in his tracks.

Hunk huffed “You’re still on that?”

“Of course why wouldn’t I be....”

“Well….You know..”

“What are you trying to say Hunk??”

“Lance he is dead. its been months he is not coming back”

“........”

“Lance????”

“.... that’s not true and you know it!”

“Lance-”

Lance hung up the phone before Hunk could continue. The intruder took this moment to approach Lance.

“ You know you made the wrong choice helping that girl”

Lance jumped back, trying to grab his pocket knife. Which ended with an epic fail.

"Stay quiznack away from me!!!" Lance screamed, reaching for his knife he dropped.

The intruder just chuckled, kicking the knife away from Lance.

"I'm not going anywhere"

The intruder unknowingly flashed his vampiric fangs. Lance turns to run only to run into his bedroom door. He hit the ground hard, knocking himself out.

" Well, sh*t....." the intruder started realizing what had happened.

"I just had to lose control, now I will have to drag him back with me." the intruder sighed


( Time skip - Lance pov )




I woke up in a strange room, or so I can tell from the ceiling. I tried to sit up but my head felt like it was going to explode if I moved. I finally got was able to sit up enough, to see I was in a strange room. I was wrapped in a blood-red blanket on a black bed. The walls were painted black and the windows were covered with heavy curtains. Through the door, I could hear people yelling.


"...... YOU KNOW NOT TO LET PEOPLE COME HERE!!!" the first voice said, it was deep, but sounded so familiar to me.


" OH, YOU F**KING HYPOCRITE YOU TOLD ME NOT TO LEAVE EVIDENCE!" the other voice sounded little like that creep that was at my house.


"THAT DOESNT MEAN YOU BRING HIM HERE!"


I sneaked over to the door to hear better.


"WHATEVER, HE KNOWS YOU. HE CALLED YOU BY YOUR NAME."


"THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE, NO ONE IN THE HUMAN WORLD KNOWS IM ALIVE, THEY THINK I DIED MONTHS AGO!"


" SHIRO WILL YOU LISTEN TO ME!!"


*Shiro is alive. that can't be true * I thought as I opened the door to see.......


Shiro and the creep staring at me.


"S-Shiro?? H-how is this possible?"





Let Emo_Keith04 know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

Hey everyone, if your reading this the person who wrote this story is having some... ISSUES... and she is doubting how amazing, adorable, beautiful, and funny she really is! If you get the chance say some encouraging stuff to her to make her feel better! FYI, this is from Clara and Karlee!

7 years
3

Further Recommendations

PARIS IN THE DARK

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Read Now
The Alpha Without a Wolf

ILoveBooks: Excellent read! Strong characters. Engaging and captivating gently. Love love love this story. Thank you.

Read Now
The Full Moon Breeding Club

Gallandro7: I originally added this because it looked interesting and I was curious how the mate process would go. I almost removed it due to several other books ahead of it, but I took an afternoon and read the entire thing in one go.I was pleasantly surprised at how well the book was crafted and that the mate...

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Read Now
THE WOMAN HE BOUGHT

jonahlee: at first i though it was a historical romance but realized it was a modern novel.I loved it ,great storyline

Read Now
The Contract Wife

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama

Read Now
My Blacksmith Savior

Jeanne: A lovely story without endless drama. Just 2 people finding each other. Truly enjoyable. Goal achieved! Thank you.

Read Now
Going For The Goalie

Willow: I loved this book so much and hope you write a series about it

Read Now
Light at the End of the Track

Sarah Widdecomb: I loved it. It’s very well written and kept me captivated while wondering what was going to happen next.

Read Now