Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

The alpha maye

"I love this book so far."

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I love it

"Love it so far I just hope there's more than 10 chapters. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. 🙂"

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alpha mate

"i loved this book so much it was so good I just really want more I loved how it ended tho but wish there was more to it"

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So far I really like book

"So far I have really enjoyed this book it is entertaining Suspenseful And April really has meaning behind it if you could keep it up like this and not drag it out you know kind of get to the point you know but have their love story evolved slowly so it's more intensified to them and their friends how they connect and get along but you've also need some drama from the old family I think that would really bring the book out to a head when They may get married start having kids and things like that you can make several books off of this is great"

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I like it

"I like the plot. it has a good story line."

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Good story

"I am enjoying the book so far we shall see how good it is soon enough"

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Alohas mate

"Good book so far"

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Alpha Mate

"I like the idea of this story. The plot is fantastic and I wish it could have new chapters soon. I swear I would have a heart attack of I don't read a new chapter soon . GOOD LUCK. Queen Boss "

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Vanmurray

"Reminds me of Cinderella, I’m truly enjoying reading this book,my first time reading a werewolf novel,. One up to the author "

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Alpha mate

"Nice plot, grammar could be bettet. "

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Great

"Good writing skills"

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Going Places

"I love the idea of the plot! I can't wait for more chapters to come out, I want to see them meet and their relationship grow. There are many grammar mistakes and run-on sentences, but you can easily read over them and know what is meant by them. Can't wait for an update!"

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Alpha mate

"The story so far keeps my attention,but I feel like I am waiting for something to happen. That is why I I have only rated 3. Hoping to raise the ratings."

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