What is your opinion?
Can I get a chance?
"Well I have read your story and it's pretty good tho, I loved the way you have done plotting and all, I would like to read your more stories and looking forward to it, I was wondering if I convert this story into comic since I'm a commission based artist, and I feel like from your stories you can see the real vision and it will be a exclusive comic, that you can sell it on Amazon and many platforms and earn money^_^ Thankyou^^^"
Nice Start!
"I like the quick start, just setting things into motion. But I do feel like there could a line or another mini paragraph would've made it better. Perhaps use line-breaks to smooth out the dialogue. I'd recommend this to my sister, she loves time travel and alternate universe AU SI-OC!incerts. There's not much to go off by so I have to say 4.3 stars of 5 stars for now. I am very interested in how this story will progress."
