What is your opinion?
Short and sweet but evocative
"This was a fun read. I'm not familiar with the source/inspiration at all, but it didn't matter one bit because of the way it was written; you could infer everything that you needed to know, and honestly the information wasn't as important as the feelings evoked between the two characters. This was a super fast read but I really enjoyed it, and only found a few small mistakes in the whole thing... a few instances of there being no space between the period of one sentence and the first letter of the next, and "We really need to work on your attitude, John Sheppard," is missing a quotation mark at the front. I hope you don't mind me pointing those out to you, and otherwise, good work! :)"
Just plain fun
"I could really tell that the author had fun writing this. Although I'm not sure what this is based off of, I really enjoyed it too. You gave me just enough information to understand it, then let the characters carry the rest. The best part of this was the interaction between the two characters and the way that they mixed. I liked that this didn't get disgusting (seriously, thank you for that) and the ending made me giggle. Great work!"
