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Can't wait to read more

"Fun characters with an exciting plot, so far. Can't wait to see if they really know.. "

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Bite of betrayal it's good so far.

"I can't really do any of this yet, I like everything so far if that helps "

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enjoying ths book

"So far, this is a really good book. When will additional chapters be posted?"

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I'm hooked!

"I can't wait to read the rest. I'm already involved with the characters and drawn into this mysterious world. I can't wait to see where this story goes next."

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Need more!!

"Hot damn!!!!! Uhggg I'm so intrigued and need to know where this is going!! I'm excited for more chapters"

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Love love love!!!

"Love the characters and I’m only two chapters in! This new world of vampires and witches is refreshing from the standard supernatural books. I am on the edge of my seat each chapter and can’t wait to see where this story takes us. Recommend to readers who like supernatural, romance and adventure. "

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Woohoo what a ride!!

"I love this fast paced action packed no holds bared book. The story has great character development and fantastic descriptive launage. Reading one chapter at a time just isn't enough!! It leaves you wanting and begging for more!! Bring it on!"

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The Bite of Betrayal

" Gave 4☆ rating so far. It captures the imagination. Waiting for more chapters, soon I hope."

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The Bite of Betrayal

"I enjoyed the book so far...just wish it was the full story! The setup is great, and I really hope she wins out in the end!"

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