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Soo good

"I stayed up all night for this book, I love all the stories from NCIS and Anthony Dinozzo. And I loved Marine Tony and JJ here. It's a very quick and pleasant read. I understand the time jumps, this way the action went smoothly and didn't make it seem like it was getting slow and boring, despite this I would like to read more, whether what happened during the story or what happens after the epilogue. "

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Tony Dinozzo, Undercover Marine

"I loved this story so much. Criminal Minds and NCIS are both one of my favorite shows, so I really enjoyed the crossover! :)"

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Good book

"This book was awesome especially because NCIS was one while reading."

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Tony Dinozzo, Undercover Marine

"Absolutely loved it and honestly wish there was more. Criminal Minds and NCIS are two of my favorite shows ever and the combination was stellar. The plot was amazing and well written. You captured JJ and Tony so perfectly in story. Kudos to you! "

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Tony Dinozzo, Undercover Marine

"I wasn't too sure his I was going to feel about this book in the beginning but now that I've finished it in glad I read it because it was an amazing book! I love both criminal minds and NCIS I just never thought they would go so well together! I hate how he disappoints Abbey though because she is my favorite. But I absolutely loved the book!!!💖"

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Great crossover

"I really liked reading this book, because for one I love both TV series and the main characters of this book. I believe that Tony is a character which is underestimated by his fellow characters and your idea was build exactly on that. The underlining critics about the other characters were cool and interesting to read. Furthermore I love that there is a happy ending for him, which is really great. Your writing style is professional, in my opinion, and your combining a great writing style with a great storyline. That doesn't happen often with fan fiction storys and it's refreshing. I totally fell in love with this story. Thank you for writing it. "

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Super

"Really interesting story.The story is also well written"

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Love it

"I love the story so much and how real it was portrayed "

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GREAT STORY

"I loved it! I've never come across a NCIS fanfiction that had a twist like this one, and I nust say it was great."

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Easy read

"Good read. Easy one day read"

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NCIS

"I wasn't a fan of the way Gibbs, David, and McGee were portrayed. Just a personal thing...."

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