What is your opinion?
A Brave story to write
"Under a cover of a light hearted writing style, the author shows the darker side of themselves that many who suffer from schizo and other mental illnesses are unable to express. I think this is a very brave story to tell, the story of how someone who suffers from these issues copes with daily life, and the difficulties they face that we may not see. All the best to the author, and I look forward to the coming chapters."
gosh I LOVE THIS
"hey, It's nice to read something like this. this really feels like reading out my life story actually. I ave been trying to confess some of the things in my life later but always I ended up being a failure. I have to tell you that you are writing my story(kind of). thank you. I'm having a good time while reading this. I like the boy in here. keep writing this kinda pure thing. good luck"
Worth Reading!
"I like the book so far and can't wait to read more. The subject the author writes about are a topic that is important, mental illness need go be discussed more! so People get a better understanding. in that way will "The shame" those how suffer from a mental illness eventually not exist anymore. 💙💚"
It's quite interesting
"I enjoyed reading it so far! I like your plot. It was an interesting one and not as cliché as many others. I hope you update it further. What I could suggest is that you add more of a rare vocabulary to make it slightly intricate; not to go overboard with it, just a little. Overall, it is a very nice story. I may not enjoy this genre as much but I appreciate the work you put into this. Keep up the good work!"
Interesting so far
"The story so far is interesting. The whole schizophrenia idea going on is intriguing but I can't say much about it as I haven't done much research on the topic.There seems to be a bit of filler throughout the chapters, and some paragraphs are whole chunks making it hard to read. There also seems to be an issue of the placement of dialogue but nothing that can't be looked past. The chapter pacing has been a bit slow for my liking, and i would recommend speeding it up a tad bit, perhaps by increasing chapter length to get more detail in at once. Overall, I like how it's going so far and the direction it's headed, but there are some writing technicalities throughout chapters I'm not fond of."
