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Is it okay to be immature? (Cringy middle school fanfic canclled)

Summary

Thomas meets a new part of him...But he might just be familiar to Logan too..and it will answer the question, is it okay to be immature? (Update: Hey, Nova here, Should I keep working on this?...its an old fanfic from middle school and it's extremely outdated.)

Genre
Other
Author
Nova
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

You know how these start

It was a normal day for the sides, Patton was practicing his dad jokes, Virgil was trying to take a nap, Roman was singing Disney songs, Logan was reading while having a coffee, Deceit was telling Patton that his jokes were good and Remus was..being Remus..and Thomas was editing his new video and then he stopped and paused. “What's wrong kiddo?” said Patton “I'm just wondering..” Thomas said... “Each of my “dark sides” is basically the opposite of my “light sides” like Remus and Roman, well yours is obvious, Patton you and Deceit are opposites of each other” “well..” said Deceit “He is wrong” Virgil interrupted by saying “hes lying..” Thomas nods and then continues “and Virgil..your..both? “yep.” replied the Anxious side..then silence for a moment. Until, “Then who is Logan’s dark side?” Logan spits out his coffee and chokes for a moment..“Don’t have one.“he said.“Yes you do!” yelled Remus “What about Antho-” He is then cut off by Logan putting his hand over his mouth,“aw yes..“said Deceit “Anthony..how about we bring him here!”

“No let's not-DID YOU JUST LICK MY HAND!?.” said Logan while he flung his hand away from Remus then Deceit smirked, snapped his finger and said “have fun..” then he and Remus disappeared but a figure remained.

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