My insights

"I have to say this is one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I have read, and I have read a couple on different sites. I was hoping to see a continuation to this one though. Your writing style is great, the flow is smooth and not too quick. I love the plot and the idea of how Hermoine and Harry got together. Hopefully this tale will continue with a part two. I think the characters have a steady development in this story, the twist in Draco's character was surprising for sure, but a welcomed one, Ron's character seems to have developed well throughout this story quiet well. Harry and Hermioine's characters are growing nicely as the tale goes on. I like that you introduced Harry's godmother and also changed up Dumbledore's character. Maybe you should put a little bit more background on the lives of Sirius and his family, Harry's Godmother, and God sister. the would be an interesting thing to learn. It would to see a little History to Lauren and her daughter, other then what has already been said. Keep up the great job!"

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