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U don't know

"It was cool I wish she hadn't had to be raped so much but ok. Let us know when the plot continues."

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Forgot the title love

"Honestly I love the series so far. It's very funny and makes you think a little, as well as touching your heart when something sad or depressing happens. "

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Jdjrjffj

"I would like to finish this book"

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Just wow!

"This story so far has BLOWN my mind, I am a young writer in the age range of the early teens. I have read 3-4 stories so far, but your is just outstanding! keep up the good work! Ps: Feel free to give me a advice as a writer like you could make a difference for me! <3"

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Submissive

"I really like the story line Im intrigued and I wanna know more Their is always a blimp with grammar but never mind that "

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Submissive On Hold

"love this story hope there is coming more "

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Submissive

"I am enjoying this book..I find it suspenseful and look forward to more chapters"

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Submissive- on hold

"Some of the story seems a bit rushed. The background information gets a bit muddy."

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Pretty good

"Pretty good so far "

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Not bad really short

"I wish there was more i get hooked on stories like these. "

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Gud

"So far , good. Should c how it goes ahead from here"

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Elaboration

"You kept the exciting parts very short. You should elaborate more.  "

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Sex

"Not enough detail "

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