Very confusing story.

"I found the description interesting and I wanted to learn more about your oc. Even though you're good at describing your oc and what happened to her, everything else isn't very engaging. You use the letter I too much, and it could be used sparingly in a first person perspective. For example: "I wore brown leather boots, black jeans and dark eyeshadow." The cover looks kind of lifeless, the lack of backgrounds is so off. The grammar is okay but sometimes a bit off. The chapters are way too short, the plot doesn't keep me interested, and I'm quite confused about the 6 year timeskip. Overall you need to make the chapters longer and more engaging, and the main character more believable. No one and I MEAN NO ONE, would be happy first seeing that they've gone to hell. It would really help to further describe what's going on and keep the reader engaged. Have a good day!"