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Inspirational Grandfather

"Your writing shows the pleasant and unforgettable moments that you have spent with your grandfather. I leave in you an enormous sensitivity and appreciation about sharing with the family the things that he loved the most. You remember with great nostalgia but at the same time with great joy the experiences both have had, and you describe those in great details. How inspiring your predecessor has been to make known to the reader the wonderful human being that your grandfather was and who definitely left his mark on you !!! Many successes in the future….Warm Regards, Silvia Kohler"

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Grandfather's Philosophy

"Dear Mr. Fry, I would’ve wanted to have known your grandfather. Such is the way you wove your story. There are times a writer borders on romanticizing a character. A non-stupendous trait is embellished and bedecked with literary tinsels as to create a tinge of uncomfortability to the reader. I’m glad this is not so with your writing as you provided a balance with poignant realistic scenes. Thank you for sharing your memories of your father’s father. Sincerely, Jessy"

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