What is your opinion?
The Shadow
"I think there's a big plot. However, the pacing is slow and dragging. I suppose the horror genre has been skipped so far (read 8 chapters). Instead, the mystery side is built up. The main character (Miranda) is not well-established, as well as the setting. These can be improved by using the five senses. There are many errors in using punctuation marks, incorrect word usage, missing words and misspellings, as well as grammatical error and paragraph structure. If or when improved, I think the story is good. Keep writing, author!"
The Shadow
"This book has an amazing plot line, filled with mysterious around every corner. Although as intriguing as the summary is, it is written in a very simplistic format with an easier set of vocabulary. 'The Shadow' has great potential to be a reader friendly novel, as it's plot line is very deep and complex which can be expanded to great extents. Within these five chapters I am deeply intrigued and in need of reading more. I suggest to improve grammar and use of vocabulary. Please revise spellings aswell. over all I would suggest this book to anyone with a taste of classical murder mysteries."
