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Amazing short retelling of the myth

"Loved the style ! I wish persephone's powers and wrath were included in the story. But it's a great retelling nonetheless "

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I LOVE IT!

"The plot has me hooked like a fish! It's great to see Hades as a victim of fate, (or The Fates, as the case may be), rather than portrayed as the initial antagonist. I never knew that Persephone and Hades had a daughter until now and I love it how you leave it at Makaria and Thanatos saying hello to each other."

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One of my favourite stories

"I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOOO MUCH. Is there one on Thanatos and Macaria?"

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"this is one of my favorite couples and I do tend to be judgmental about them, but I think you did them justice. I enjoyed your story very much. thanks for the story."

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