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Ndrangheta

"I really got into this story was even laughing at times worth a read "

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Ndrangheta

"I love how smart and string she is beautiful story ❤️❤️❤️"

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Sjwaosjdd

"Ammaaaaaazzzinnnggggg"

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Ndrangheta

"This was a funny and a good story 💗💗"

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Awesome

"This was great the character development was amazing great writing cant wait to read more of your stuff"

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Ndrangheta

"Love this book definitely will read again hope there is a part 2"

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Midd

"Mafia danger zone"

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Great book!

"I did enjoy this book thoroughly. I would have preferred a bit more action (if you know what I mean) but it was a great read. "

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Ndrangheta

"It's well written and I love your plot! I love your characters and their personalities, and I also love how you kept in mind that they are still humans even if involved in a gang! I would gladly read more from you!"

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A nice story

"It was a nice and easy story. I wish there were more logs, more of his thoughts to get him better and understand his struggles that made him act like that , also there is this veil around E that I would like to know… maybe on a sequel or after your edit that is required because at some point I got a little confused 😐 I didn’t like the scene after their sexual encounter, I think you get really soft on him , a stop means STOP even if there were feelings, that shows respect, the whole “lost control” thing it’s so bullshit!!! What the F word with L? One suggestion change their age difference, 20 years are a lot , I fancy them to grow old together;) Overall I liked it and I route for them even with their differences ;) "

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Nice

"Loved the book but why Edward left Ellen alive in the first place,should have been explained. He generally ruthlessly killed people first and then talk"

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Finding the Truth

"This book has matured well and I love that it has. Everyone has had some form of development, the story holds your attention and has you wondering what's next. As well as, it has a little something for everyone. The relationships are fun to see and leaves you wanting more. Tho there are some unanswered questions, I look forward to the author to anwser these in the future (crosses fingers for a sequel)"

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