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Harry The FUCKED UP DICK

"I dislike the plot"

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"Okay FIRST, I know Ron probably would get mad and run off thinking to himself what he did wrong, then beat up the person that made Hermione fall out of love with Ron in the first place. Second, I also applaud your work even though it could use a little tweaking I'm sure if you write MORE chapters this story will be AMAZING."

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Update soon

"It's a great start to the story. However wish you would up date"

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Im new here

"I'm pretty new at this but i like the plot. needs more chapters."

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Amazing

"Loved every thing "

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Alright

"You have a good writing style and good punctuation BUT I need more. I need about 20 more chapters. I need Harry and Hermione to DATE. I need fights between Harry and Ron. I need fights between Hermione and Ginny. other than that it was good BUT SERIOUSLY ADD MORE"

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That is not true Ron and Hermione was bffs so and harry married ginny and Ron married Hermione and both families had kids

"✖️ Ron and Hermione are friends and harry in the 7th movie the ginny and harry did not get In a fight and in the 8th one the got married so did Ron and Hermione so boom"

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Well i thank the person who has written it for her/his hardwork. But honestly it made no sense

"The whole thing "

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Aweful

"Aweful really"

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